Filming and Editing for skate and surf videos

I worked with OSL productions to edit and help with parts of the filming of this video to send out to companies interested in sponsoring my boyfriend. It was filmed in Leucadia, California we used a fisheye camera, and edited on iMovie. Although it looks sloppy, casual and thrown together, editing it to make it look completely effortless took more time than it did to film the entire thing. The random parts where they fall or mess up is hard to determine wether or not to leave it in the video or take it out because if you take out too many parts where they fall, then it doesn't feel as genuine. I kept all the clips of goofing around, I just shortened them to not distract from the main purpose of the video. This was released a year ago and the last time I talked to him he told me he eventually got sponsored by two of the companies we sent the video to, and he is now competing regularly. Feedback and advice would be nice even if you don't have background in film
http://vimeo.com/30288589

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